Hello! While almost everything on Marco's request looks good, we had a few quick points we wanted to run by you before we approved everything:
While the ability will remain functionally unchanged, it's probably best to specify that Marco's ability will not create fog. Ink, or smoke, or even just "darkness" are probably better for writing this down. (This is minor, but it helps avoid litigation from the Fog God.)
Marco's camouflage is significantly weaker as a Tier 2 Spell than some of the example spells given. While we will approve this if you like it as is, we would be fine with some adjustments, up to and including:
No time/day restriction
The illusion works well enough to fool any creature's sight, provided they don't have specifically enhanced vision
Indefinite pattern retention (until he chooses to either revert or pick up a new pattern)
Retaining reduced visibility if he's moving through an area with similar patterns
Once we've read over your response, we should be able to get back to you shortly!
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While the ability will remain functionally unchanged, it's probably best to specify that Marco's ability will not create fog. Ink, or smoke, or even just "darkness" are probably better for writing this down. (This is minor, but it helps avoid litigation from the Fog God.)
Marco's camouflage is significantly weaker as a Tier 2 Spell than some of the example spells given. While we will approve this if you like it as is, we would be fine with some adjustments, up to and including:
- No time/day restriction
- The illusion works well enough to fool any creature's sight, provided they don't have specifically enhanced vision
- Indefinite pattern retention (until he chooses to either revert or pick up a new pattern)
- Retaining reduced visibility if he's moving through an area with similar patterns
Once we've read over your response, we should be able to get back to you shortly!