In our preliminary review of this request, there were a couple points of concern we would like to address, so as to give you time to make adjustments if needed.
As the proof-providing log is still in progress, we cannot completely verify its tenability just yet. However, at the time of our review, the extant text emphasized greatly that this was a matter of personal revenge (Kurumi targeting and intending to kill Marco for his prior murder of Yuuri, while Yuuri helps), rather than that of God Devotion. While at a lower tier this would be perfectly acceptable as proof, Tier 3 rewards are for "truly devout followers" and acts; we would need to see more emphasis in the log itself on how your character is committing this act for the Fog God. Because the theme of personal revenge is so strong, its connection to her god -- and thus its viability as a Tier 3 promotion -- feels incidental, rather than deliberate, and is not what we're looking for at this tier.
Additionally, while the rest of your listed boons look superb, the backfire as specified would not be possible. In God Boon backfires, these are alterations that the god willingly performs contrary to a character's request, as said god sees fit. However, the nature of this deception isn't her style, and doesn't align with her general goals. We also feel that this sort of modification would make the Fog God implicitly supportive of your character's self-delusion, which could result in conflict later on.
Once your log has reached completion, if you would like to change your offering, or if there are any other edits you would like to make to your request in light of this information, please let us know.
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As the proof-providing log is still in progress, we cannot completely verify its tenability just yet. However, at the time of our review, the extant text emphasized greatly that this was a matter of personal revenge (Kurumi targeting and intending to kill Marco for his prior murder of Yuuri, while Yuuri helps), rather than that of God Devotion. While at a lower tier this would be perfectly acceptable as proof, Tier 3 rewards are for "truly devout followers" and acts; we would need to see more emphasis in the log itself on how your character is committing this act for the Fog God. Because the theme of personal revenge is so strong, its connection to her god -- and thus its viability as a Tier 3 promotion -- feels incidental, rather than deliberate, and is not what we're looking for at this tier.
Additionally, while the rest of your listed boons look superb, the backfire as specified would not be possible. In God Boon backfires, these are alterations that the god willingly performs contrary to a character's request, as said god sees fit. However, the nature of this deception isn't her style, and doesn't align with her general goals. We also feel that this sort of modification would make the Fog God implicitly supportive of your character's self-delusion, which could result in conflict later on.
Once your log has reached completion, if you would like to change your offering, or if there are any other edits you would like to make to your request in light of this information, please let us know.