For the most part, this looks good, but we do need to make a few changes and ask for a clarification.
As for the gills, since Noa will be gaining an additional abiity in the form of his mouth, the gills themselves can be present but not functional. Additionally, we do feel it's an ability that is more inline with mers or kelpie. We feel that its addition on another monster's secondary form(s) would count as too much of a power to be given that freely.
Furthermore, when Noa uses his White Lightning ability under water, he'll also be shocked and feel the associated pain.
Finally, we'd like a clarification about his dwelling in Dyster: would a hill face work as well, or are you specifically requesting it be rock?
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As for the gills, since Noa will be gaining an additional abiity in the form of his mouth, the gills themselves can be present but not functional. Additionally, we do feel it's an ability that is more inline with mers or kelpie. We feel that its addition on another monster's secondary form(s) would count as too much of a power to be given that freely.
Furthermore, when Noa uses his White Lightning ability under water, he'll also be shocked and feel the associated pain.
Finally, we'd like a clarification about his dwelling in Dyster: would a hill face work as well, or are you specifically requesting it be rock?